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Strong: A Work of Prose



What is this feeling of entitlement?


Why do humans see the need to stand above their peers?


Why not stand with them? Are we not equal? Does God not love us all?


Are humans really so blind, as to think that the earth rotates around them? That they are the only ones that matter?


I am sick of this everlasting fight for I know I shall never win!


And yet. . . Still I try. Still I fight for change. I still continue to rise up when I fall.


Why is that?


Is it human-nature or my own personal struggle to keep my sanity?


Whatever the answer, I will continue to rise, and continue to believe.


For I am strong and will always be thus.
:icontarnisis:
In most of my works of prose and poetry I always seem to be asking questions without answers. I suppose I'll just add this one to that list. . . . ^^; I like to think that this is upbeat, but it still seems depressing. . . Thoughts? :hmm:

~Tarnisis :blackrose:
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*TheLastUnicorn1985 Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think this is very up beat in a way dear.:aww: it's also very true! It seems it really is human nature to never give up, no matter how bleak the situation is, this serves as a reminder to me to never give up on my beliefs especially! Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us!:tighthug:
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~Tarnisis Nov 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much, Hannah! I'm glad that I was able to write something upbeat for once. lol ;p
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*TheLastUnicorn1985 Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're most welcome dear!:glomp:
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~Third-Eye99 Nov 1, 2012  Professional General Artist
I really like this and I love the thought provoking questions like you have. Not that I'm a writer... but when I'm writing my random drabble and thoughts I always find I ask questions like that.

It might be kind of gloomy sort of, but it's also very inspiring in a way as well because it reflects that we all just want to continue fighting to live and to be alive and to try to change things for the betterment of ourselves and the world really. Well that's what I got from it anyway!
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~Tarnisis Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
You always give me such wonderful comments, my dear! :blush: And questions are the bread and butter of life, so I'm glad mine are good ones. :aww:
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~Third-Eye99 Nov 3, 2012  Professional General Artist
:) I'm so glad you enjoy my comments!
Yes, questions are one of the things that makes life interesting and keeps you on your toes!
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~TwitardGirl Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Questions we all ask ourselves! You did a fabulous job sweetie! Very good questions and an amazing poem! I'm sorry that you have to deal with those questions love!
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~Tarnisis Oct 30, 2012  Student Writer
Danke! :D I have the rather unfortunate habit of thinking about things I can't change. :rofl:

But I'm glad that my line of thought is interesting to read. :hug:
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~TwitardGirl Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am the same way love, thinking of things I cannot change! And you put words perfectly! :hug:
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~Tarnisis Oct 31, 2012  Student Writer
Well, it's always nice to know that I'm not alone. lol ;p
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