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Fallen: A Free Verse Poem

He falls . . .  Oh how he falls through the abyss into a unknown void.

He never hits bottom for he never stops falling.

For how can you stop falling when you've come from the top?

He was Loki the Prince of Asgard, but now he is but a broken shell that is constantly reminded of his failure through others actions against him.

The torture of knowing that you are the thing that you once feared the most, would tear down any man. But this fallen Prince was no mere man. . . No. . .  

He was a God.

.  .  .  .

Now Loki watches from the sidelines wishing for death with all his being. Knowing that those he loved most are nothing but a whisper of a dream. He wishes that Thor was his 'real' brother and that his mother and father were the Asgardian Royalty, but he knows that it is a lie.

This Fallen Prince slowly rises from the ashes of his old life and begins again. . . But this time he knows who he is for certain.

There is no question of what he is.

He is Loki, the one who should have been King.

He is Loki the God of Mischief!

A Entry for the "Too Many Feels" contest on :iconlokiliteraturelovers: As it says, it's a free style poem. Nowadays I can't write a poem that rhymes for the life of me! :giggle:

I just wanted to writing something for this great contest! :dummy:

You can vote here: [link]

~Tarnisis :blackrose:
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TheLastUnicorn1985 Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
a very good poem dearest! Sweet Loki, I confess I want to cry EVERY TIME I watch him let go of the sceptre...and fall. the first time we saw it in the theatre, I wept.
Beautifully written dedication to our sweet prince.:heart:
Tarnisis Oct 28, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks Hannah! :glomp: I tried my best. ^^;

And I cry every single time I see Loki's scenes in Thor. . . All he needed was some proper hugging and coddling and he would have been right as rain! Aww the Loki Feels. . . :aww:
TheLastUnicorn1985 Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you did a great job dear!:glomp:
the FEELS FOR LOKIII!!!:iconfinallyplz:
Tarnisis Oct 28, 2012  Student Writer
Gahhh~! :nuu: Darn those feels!
TheLastUnicorn1985 Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lunari-Sakana Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awe I loved it! Poor Loki so many feels on this:heart:
Tarnisis Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks Luna! :huggle: And I felt the feels too. . .
Lunari-Sakana Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
Tarnisis Oct 16, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks. :D
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